對雅思考生來(lái)說(shuō)，作文寫(xiě)完沒(méi)有人能批改，從而無(wú)法實(shí)現更好更快地提高，可以說(shuō)是很多人雅思備考時(shí)的一個(gè)痛，下面小站雅思頻道為大家分享一名雅思考官建議的雅思小作文修改列表，備考雅思的同學(xué)對著(zhù)這個(gè)列表修改小作文，再也不用四處求人了。
In task 1 it is important that you accurately describe the information from the diagram so you don’t lose marks under Task Response. The difficulty is to decide what is the key information as there is often a lot of data to process. One way of thinking about this, is to ask yourself if someone could draw the chart and graph from the information in your report. This is not easy to do and so to help you, you will find below a 8 point checklist, an exercise and a practice suggestion.
雅思小作文最難的地方就在于確定哪些信息是最核心的。而一種思路就是你可以問(wèn)問(wèn)你自己如果讓別人對照著(zhù)你的作文里提供的信息能否畫(huà)出原圖表。不過(guò)即使是這樣思考也不容易，所以我會(huì )為你提供8點(diǎn)核查項來(lái)幫助你。
雅思作文檢查列表 Checklist
Here is my 8 point checklist to help you include the relevant details. I suggest you use it to check your own work: you should be able to answer “yes”to all the questions.
1. Type of diagram 圖表類(lèi)型
Have you correctly identified whether it is a bar chart/line graph/pie chart/flow chart/table?
有沒(méi)有說(shuō)清楚這個(gè)一個(gè)什么樣的圖表----柱狀圖?線(xiàn)圖?餅圖?還是流程圖?
2. The correct tense 時(shí)態(tài)
Have you correctly identified whether the data in the chart relates to past time, a current state of affairs or a future prediction? This includes not just using the correct tenses but also including specific times in your report.
有沒(méi)有運用正確的時(shí)態(tài)呢?要記住，不止要用對時(shí)態(tài)，還要再小作文中寫(xiě)清具體的時(shí)間!
3. The subjects 對象
Have you included all the subjects that are referred to in the diagram? Even if you have a bar chart ortable naming 8 different countries for example, you still need to refer to them all in your report.
所有圖表中所提到的對象都寫(xiě)進(jìn)小作文了嗎?如果圖表里提到8個(gè)國家，全部都要寫(xiě)進(jìn)去哦~
4. Units
Have you included references to the units? These may be units of time (months/years etc), money (millions of ￡) or simple numbers (10,000s). To do this, you need to read the x and y axes carefully.
單位寫(xiě)清楚了嗎?X軸和Y軸上的單位都要看清楚哦~
5. Highs and lows/Beginnings and ends/Biggest and smallest
Have you included the extremes shown in the diagram? In nearly all charts and graphs these are key features to include as they give the reader a frame for understanding the chart or graph. When there is a lot of data, you may not include every extreme so you need to use your judgement.
文中有重要信息點(diǎn)了嗎?最高點(diǎn)、最低點(diǎn)、起點(diǎn)、終點(diǎn)、最多的、最少的一定要寫(xiě)進(jìn)去!
6. Patterns and trends 模式和趨勢
Have you noted any patterns?
In dynamic charts (when there is a change in time), it is nearly always important to note whether the general trend is upwards or downwards.
在一個(gè)有變化的圖表里，整體趨勢如何，上升?下降?要寫(xiě)清~
In static charts (when there is only one time frame), it can be important to note patterns. For example, if you look at my sample report on holiday destinations, you will see that I group England, Scotland and Wales together and note that they have a similar pattern.
7. Exceptions
Is there anything in the chart that is completely different to the general pattern? If so, this too is very likely to be a key detail that needs to be noted.
除了常規方式外的東西也要寫(xiě)到，就是圖表中的“例外”。
8. Ordering information排序
Have you ordered the information in a logical way? It is no good putting all the right information in if the keys points are hidden away. This can happen if you follow the order of the chart without thinking. Possible logical ways of ordering the report include:
從圖表中選擇的信息，又按照合理的邏輯排列好順序嗎?常見(jiàn)的邏輯順序有：
start with the most significant detail 從最重要的細節開(kāi)始說(shuō)起
start with the general pattern, then note exceptions 從一般模式說(shuō)起，然后注明有例外
group items that are similar 寫(xiě)一組里面有相似性的東西
move from the largest to the smallest 從最大值寫(xiě)到最小值
move from the first in time to the last in time 從時(shí)間起點(diǎn)寫(xiě)到時(shí)間終點(diǎn)
以上即是小站小編為大家編譯的雅思考官對于雅思小作文的一個(gè)信息匯總表，希望能對小作文的復習有所幫助。
